Post by Ace on Jun 13, 2007 9:23:41 GMT -5
An uncompleted, story.
I'll post a few more chapters, if you say so..
I had a total of 7-10 chapters, but they went missing...
Chapter 1:
Falco and Fox were each doing there own thing in the lounge part of the great fox.
Fox was making coff'e, while Falco was reading the news paper.
"Uhg.. Why Do I lock these things..." Fox said with frustration.
"Could you pass me My blaster?" Fox asked Falco.
"What ever" Falco replyed.
Falco Then Grabbed fox's blaster off the coff'e table.
He walked over to Fox and shoved it on the bench.
The box was full of coff'e beans, That had a lock on it.
Fox Picked up the blaster and aimed it furiously at the box of coff'e beans.
"But before you do so Fox..." Falco said with a smurk "Here's the keys".
"How come you have them Falco?" Fox said rubbing his face and placing his blaster in his Holder in the side of his pants.
"I knew you'd always lose them, Like the other day, They were in the toilet" Falco said With a slight smurk. "So I washed em' And put them in my pocket" Falco said.
"Well, Thanks" Fox replyed.
Fox then used the keys to unlock the box with all the coff'e beans.
Fox then put the keys in his pocket one he unlocked the box.
"Uh! I think i'll be taking those" Falco said pointing to Fox's pocket.
"Okay Then" Fox replyed.
Fox passed the Keys to Falco, and started to put the coff'e beens into his coff'e mug.
Falco Started to walk over to the Leather chairs.
But he got bumped into by slippy, Who came running through the metal doors.
"Wow! Watch out slimmy!" Falco Growled.
"Sorry!" Slippy said quickly.
Slippy ran to fox, Slippy looked frightened.
"Uh... Can I have a coff'e?" Slippy said, He was puffed.
"Umm.. Sure, whats the rush?" Fox asked.
"Dunno" Slippy replyed.
Fox looked confused.
But he just nodded and pored some more coff'e into a mug.
Falco was confused as well, But he just sat there and read the news paper.
Slippy exited the room once his coff'e was ready, and went back to his room.
Krystal then enterd the lounge part of the great fox.
when she enterd the room, She started to cough.
Falco and Fox coverd there mouths.
Fox used a tea towl and tied it around his snout.
Krystal had gotten the flue about 3 days back.
Everyone stayed as far away as possible.
She noticed why they were covering there mouths.
But she was intrestedin asking what thye had to say about it.
"So.. Boys, Why are we covering you're mouths?" Krystal asked.
"uhh.. bad smell from slippy!" Fox replyed.
"oh really?" Krystal asked.
"No, You're just sick, We don't wanna catch you're girms!" Falco said trufully.
Krystal dident reply, she just giggled at the looks on there faces.
She started to walk off when the red alarm went off.
This ment that there was a New mission, and they had to act fast.
They then ran straight into the AR-WING storage room located at the bottom of the great fox.
Fox Front flipped into the seat of the ar-wing.
Falco Double back flipped and grinned at krystal.
"Don't Get that from Fox do ya?" Falco Said.
"Humpf!" Krystal said in discussed as she enterd her's and put on her speakers.
The speakers are connected to every ones head peice, They are activated when the arwings are turned on.
And Finaly, Slippy jumped into his AR-WING.
Only to find he slammed his head onto the shield on the AR-WING.
"Haha! You forgot to open it again Slippy!" Falco said, He was cracking up.
Slippy then opened up the shiled and hopped in.
They all got a briefing of there new mission.
"Starfox team, Get ready!" Pepper said.
General Pepper was talking through a communicator in conneria.
There mission was to protect the lylat.
From Not Andross...
But from Koel, The biggest thing in the galexy.
"Communicators.. On.. V-Output on.." Fox said.
The AR-WINGS were lowerd into the Lylat, And launched off...
Chapter 2:
Falco, Fox, Slippy and Krystal all headed for Conneria.
The teams Laser's were not strong enough to battle against a enemy the size of Koel.
Koel Was a genetic life form, that had been tested and failed.
He was the size of the gate Not too far off the lylat.
The gate was atleast 100 Ar-wings lenght.
One swift of an arm of koel would destroy anything in it's path instenly.
koel was making it's way to Coneria, The Space patrol have tried to defend with rockets, Little damage has been done to Koel.
The Starfox team were 30 minutes from coneria, They had to act fast.
"G-Mode on, We have to get there quicker than the speed were going" Fox Said to all the members through the head phone peice.
"Uh.. Fox, What if we don't come out of this alive?" Slippy mutterd "Koel seems to be Bigger and stronger than the aporiods!"
"Well, If you do die, You better of helped!" Falco replyed.
"Were not going to die, We've been through tons of big guys, He's just another one of them" Fox said through to slippy.
They then reached coneria, and then went inside general peppers office.
"Member's of Starfox, Coneria Is in peril.. As may be the Lylat. We need to stop Koel!" General Pepper said with a loud voice.
"We'll do our best General, But our lasers at this momment are not strong enough, We need up grades" Fox replyed Smoothly.
"Sure, Anything you need is a flick of the wrists away" General Pepper said "Fly you're AR-WINGS into the storage, Then we can upgrade them".
So the Starfox team flew there ar-wings into the storage.
They landed on the ground, And the Army ame into and started to upgrade the Ar-wings With all types of lasers and boosts.
"Mine looks the coolest" Said Falco.
"Everything of you're is the coolest, Isent it Falco?" Fox said to Falco.
"Yea, Cause' it's mine" Falco replyed.
Once the Ar-wings were finished, Shined and Upgraded, Falco Grabbed a Spray paint can and sprayed Falco, The Cool One On the side of his Ar-wing.
"Haha! So true.." Falco said to himself.
Falco then went around to Slippy's Ar-wing.
Slippy was too busy Eye-Goggling His new Ar-wing, So Falco Spray Painted on slippys ar-wing The Annoying one And ran off laughing.
Falco Then jumped Into his Ar-wing and flew into the Lylat.
The other team Members followed.
"Okay guys, Koel isent Far off, We Need to get him ASAP" Fox Said to every member.
Slippy Then came side on with fox, And fox could read what Falco Had Spray Painted on his Ar-wing.
"Ha, Falco.." Fox said to himself.
Once the Team Had reached Koel, There expectations about the Battle dropped.
"Oh...." Slippy Said.
"Uh... WHo does think he is?" Said Falco.
The team then started to shoot Koel, there New laser's were doing little Damage, But there Bombs were effective.
Falco And Fox dodged Laser's from koel, His laser's Easily out match There's.
Slippy and Krystal shot at koel every now and then, They were just too frighten to go close.
Koel Tossed metal Chunks at the Starfox team, Falco Got Hit, His Wing fell off and he plumeted down to an unknown planet....
Chapter 3:
Falco Was Still Alive, But he was stugeling for his life.
The Ar-wing was starting to Catch alite.
As he Fell, He was pushing as hard as he could down On the control Handle.
He started to break into sweat.
The Flames started to build up heat.
"Urrgh!" Falco yelled out.
He slammed his Hand hard on the Transmitter.
All Hope Was lost, He couldent seem to budge it to make a turn away from the Planet.
As the Battle against Koel Was in place, Falco Wasent sure If they would Be able to defete Koel Without him.
The Battle was heating up.
"We Havent Got time to recue Falco Now, But once we defete this guy, We'll save him Team!" Fox Yelled through the speakers.
None of the members replyed, Just Kept on Batteling Koel.
Fox had Hit one of the Weak spots, And part of Koel Exsploded.
A huge Screech led afterwards.
"UURGH!!" Every team Member screamed.
The screech was from Koel, it had Used the screech to Paralize the Starfox team.
As It did, The Team Had all coverd there ears and Screaming in Pain.
"Uhhh!!" SLippy Screamed as he shook his head.
"Grrr! We Can't let Him get any cheap shots Guys!" Fox Said In pain.
So they carried on there battle.
Falco's Ar-wing Was about to hit the ground Of the Unknown Planet.
"Guys! My transmission mighten be the best, But You guys are my family, And don't you ever forget it" Falco Said As He was seconds from death.
"FALCO!" Fox yelled through to Falco.
But he Got no reply.
Falco's Ar-wing had hit the ground.
But remarkibly Falco Had survived.
but His ar-wing was smashed to peices.
As he hit the ground, He was tossed out of the Ar-wing.
Altough he lived, He was Knocked out.
The surounding was calming.
Forest as far as the eye could see.
Random Animals passed by, They were the same animals at Conirias zoo's.
2 hours passed as falco Awoke.
"Urgh.." Falco Sighed in Pain.
"Were Am I" Falco Said.
Falco then noticed his Ar-wing was smashed into peices and bits lay everywere.
"No..." Falco said, His eyes opend wide as he noticed His pride ar-wing was destroid.
As he tryed to get up, A slightly burned picture lay on the grass.
It was a picture of Falco and Fox together.
"WIll I ever see you again.." Falco said in a small voice.
20 minutes went by as he sat down on some tree roots looking at the Photo.
Night was starting To Fall, So Falco Krept under a peice of metal From the Ar-wing.
He desided to put it over a gap or tree roots.
The tree roots were high, So once he put the part of metal on it, It was shelterd.
"It'll have to do" Falco said.
Night fell and Falco Slept.
The Battle was still underway, As koel was down to his last minute.
"We've got him now!" Fox said cheerfully.
Fox then shot his lat bomb at kowl.
It hit Koel, Right in the middle of It.
Each of the members took damage from the explosion of Koel.
"WOW! That was a bit of a blast" Fox said as he regained strenght from the blast.
"Phew.. We showed him" Slippy replyed.
"The Lylat Is saved!" Krystal Yelled.
"Yea... But Falco Isent" Fox said.
"Well, Lets go look for him!" Slippy Screamed.
"Not just now, We have to confurm Koels Defete to the general First" fox replyed...
Chapter 4
As the starfox Team Flew back to Coneria, Fox recieved a message.
"Well o' Well.. Look what we have here! The Pup!"
"Wolf! What Are you doing here!?" Fox said through that Transmission.
"I seen the explosion, Knowing you, I was positive i'd find you here" Wolf Said as he was Drawing closer.
"Ooooh... The Lovely Krystal.. Words can not discribe you're buitey.." Panther said.
"Were'z the Pesky Bird!" Leon said.
"He fell down to that planet!" Slippy Replyed to Leon.
"Slippy! You Talk to much!" Said Fox.
"It's time to take you down, Once and for all!" Wolf Shouted.
"Don't be to sure" Fox Replyed.
Fox and Wolf Imeddietly Started to shoot each other.
While Krystal Went for Leon And slippy went for Panther.
"You Have nothing Pup!" Wolf Yelled.
"Don't be so Cocky, Wolf" Fox replyed.
As the War between Fox and Wolf raged on, Wolf managed to get Behind Fox and started to shoot Fox.
"Urrgh" Fox Said as he manuverd out of the way by Backflipping.
"Now I have you!" Fox Said slyley.
"Tuesche Fox" Wolf Replyed.
as Wolf tried to Get away from fox, Slippy Turned to Wolf, And Charged up his lazer.
"You Can't honestly Belive you'll hit me Slippy" Wolf Said.
"Take that back!" SLippy said as he Shot Wolfl
"Grr.. So you're not as Useless as you seem" Wolf Said to slippy.
But slippy took his eye off Panther, And Panther shot Slippy.
"Urr!!" Slippy Said as his ar-wing shook.
"Ha, So you are useless" Wolf Laughed.
As the fight against Krystal And Leon Went on, Leon Seem to Be damaging her ship... Fast.
"Help fox! Ar-wings arnt ment to stand this much punishment!" Krystal Screamed out.
"Say Bye-Bye Krysssstal" Leon Said.
As Leon was one shot away from Killing Krystal, Panther Shot leons ship, Causing him to make him lazer miss Krystal.
"Don't touch her!" Panther said.
"Phew" Krystal Said in Relief.
"Come on Panther, Were here to take Down Starfox!" Leon Yelled.
"yes.. But not My Precious Krystal!" Panther Said.
"I'll get H-" "Enough! Staop Argueing You bunch of fools!" Wolf Interupted.
"Guys, We havent got enough time to fight Starwolf, Lets just go" Fox Said as Wolf, Leon and panther argued.
Starfox Managed to get away without The Starwolf team Noticing.
"Urrgh! We'll get you one day!" Wolf Shouted as he noticed the starfox team Had gone.
"Right, lets go to the General, And lets hope we get no more interuptions" Fox Said.
"Yea, I sure hate the Starwolf Gang!" Slippy replyed
I'll post a few more chapters, if you say so..
I had a total of 7-10 chapters, but they went missing...
Chapter 1:
Falco and Fox were each doing there own thing in the lounge part of the great fox.
Fox was making coff'e, while Falco was reading the news paper.
"Uhg.. Why Do I lock these things..." Fox said with frustration.
"Could you pass me My blaster?" Fox asked Falco.
"What ever" Falco replyed.
Falco Then Grabbed fox's blaster off the coff'e table.
He walked over to Fox and shoved it on the bench.
The box was full of coff'e beans, That had a lock on it.
Fox Picked up the blaster and aimed it furiously at the box of coff'e beans.
"But before you do so Fox..." Falco said with a smurk "Here's the keys".
"How come you have them Falco?" Fox said rubbing his face and placing his blaster in his Holder in the side of his pants.
"I knew you'd always lose them, Like the other day, They were in the toilet" Falco said With a slight smurk. "So I washed em' And put them in my pocket" Falco said.
"Well, Thanks" Fox replyed.
Fox then used the keys to unlock the box with all the coff'e beans.
Fox then put the keys in his pocket one he unlocked the box.
"Uh! I think i'll be taking those" Falco said pointing to Fox's pocket.
"Okay Then" Fox replyed.
Fox passed the Keys to Falco, and started to put the coff'e beens into his coff'e mug.
Falco Started to walk over to the Leather chairs.
But he got bumped into by slippy, Who came running through the metal doors.
"Wow! Watch out slimmy!" Falco Growled.
"Sorry!" Slippy said quickly.
Slippy ran to fox, Slippy looked frightened.
"Uh... Can I have a coff'e?" Slippy said, He was puffed.
"Umm.. Sure, whats the rush?" Fox asked.
"Dunno" Slippy replyed.
Fox looked confused.
But he just nodded and pored some more coff'e into a mug.
Falco was confused as well, But he just sat there and read the news paper.
Slippy exited the room once his coff'e was ready, and went back to his room.
Krystal then enterd the lounge part of the great fox.
when she enterd the room, She started to cough.
Falco and Fox coverd there mouths.
Fox used a tea towl and tied it around his snout.
Krystal had gotten the flue about 3 days back.
Everyone stayed as far away as possible.
She noticed why they were covering there mouths.
But she was intrestedin asking what thye had to say about it.
"So.. Boys, Why are we covering you're mouths?" Krystal asked.
"uhh.. bad smell from slippy!" Fox replyed.
"oh really?" Krystal asked.
"No, You're just sick, We don't wanna catch you're girms!" Falco said trufully.
Krystal dident reply, she just giggled at the looks on there faces.
She started to walk off when the red alarm went off.
This ment that there was a New mission, and they had to act fast.
They then ran straight into the AR-WING storage room located at the bottom of the great fox.
Fox Front flipped into the seat of the ar-wing.
Falco Double back flipped and grinned at krystal.
"Don't Get that from Fox do ya?" Falco Said.
"Humpf!" Krystal said in discussed as she enterd her's and put on her speakers.
The speakers are connected to every ones head peice, They are activated when the arwings are turned on.
And Finaly, Slippy jumped into his AR-WING.
Only to find he slammed his head onto the shield on the AR-WING.
"Haha! You forgot to open it again Slippy!" Falco said, He was cracking up.
Slippy then opened up the shiled and hopped in.
They all got a briefing of there new mission.
"Starfox team, Get ready!" Pepper said.
General Pepper was talking through a communicator in conneria.
There mission was to protect the lylat.
From Not Andross...
But from Koel, The biggest thing in the galexy.
"Communicators.. On.. V-Output on.." Fox said.
The AR-WINGS were lowerd into the Lylat, And launched off...
Chapter 2:
Falco, Fox, Slippy and Krystal all headed for Conneria.
The teams Laser's were not strong enough to battle against a enemy the size of Koel.
Koel Was a genetic life form, that had been tested and failed.
He was the size of the gate Not too far off the lylat.
The gate was atleast 100 Ar-wings lenght.
One swift of an arm of koel would destroy anything in it's path instenly.
koel was making it's way to Coneria, The Space patrol have tried to defend with rockets, Little damage has been done to Koel.
The Starfox team were 30 minutes from coneria, They had to act fast.
"G-Mode on, We have to get there quicker than the speed were going" Fox Said to all the members through the head phone peice.
"Uh.. Fox, What if we don't come out of this alive?" Slippy mutterd "Koel seems to be Bigger and stronger than the aporiods!"
"Well, If you do die, You better of helped!" Falco replyed.
"Were not going to die, We've been through tons of big guys, He's just another one of them" Fox said through to slippy.
They then reached coneria, and then went inside general peppers office.
"Member's of Starfox, Coneria Is in peril.. As may be the Lylat. We need to stop Koel!" General Pepper said with a loud voice.
"We'll do our best General, But our lasers at this momment are not strong enough, We need up grades" Fox replyed Smoothly.
"Sure, Anything you need is a flick of the wrists away" General Pepper said "Fly you're AR-WINGS into the storage, Then we can upgrade them".
So the Starfox team flew there ar-wings into the storage.
They landed on the ground, And the Army ame into and started to upgrade the Ar-wings With all types of lasers and boosts.
"Mine looks the coolest" Said Falco.
"Everything of you're is the coolest, Isent it Falco?" Fox said to Falco.
"Yea, Cause' it's mine" Falco replyed.
Once the Ar-wings were finished, Shined and Upgraded, Falco Grabbed a Spray paint can and sprayed Falco, The Cool One On the side of his Ar-wing.
"Haha! So true.." Falco said to himself.
Falco then went around to Slippy's Ar-wing.
Slippy was too busy Eye-Goggling His new Ar-wing, So Falco Spray Painted on slippys ar-wing The Annoying one And ran off laughing.
Falco Then jumped Into his Ar-wing and flew into the Lylat.
The other team Members followed.
"Okay guys, Koel isent Far off, We Need to get him ASAP" Fox Said to every member.
Slippy Then came side on with fox, And fox could read what Falco Had Spray Painted on his Ar-wing.
"Ha, Falco.." Fox said to himself.
Once the Team Had reached Koel, There expectations about the Battle dropped.
"Oh...." Slippy Said.
"Uh... WHo does think he is?" Said Falco.
The team then started to shoot Koel, there New laser's were doing little Damage, But there Bombs were effective.
Falco And Fox dodged Laser's from koel, His laser's Easily out match There's.
Slippy and Krystal shot at koel every now and then, They were just too frighten to go close.
Koel Tossed metal Chunks at the Starfox team, Falco Got Hit, His Wing fell off and he plumeted down to an unknown planet....
Chapter 3:
Falco Was Still Alive, But he was stugeling for his life.
The Ar-wing was starting to Catch alite.
As he Fell, He was pushing as hard as he could down On the control Handle.
He started to break into sweat.
The Flames started to build up heat.
"Urrgh!" Falco yelled out.
He slammed his Hand hard on the Transmitter.
All Hope Was lost, He couldent seem to budge it to make a turn away from the Planet.
As the Battle against Koel Was in place, Falco Wasent sure If they would Be able to defete Koel Without him.
The Battle was heating up.
"We Havent Got time to recue Falco Now, But once we defete this guy, We'll save him Team!" Fox Yelled through the speakers.
None of the members replyed, Just Kept on Batteling Koel.
Fox had Hit one of the Weak spots, And part of Koel Exsploded.
A huge Screech led afterwards.
"UURGH!!" Every team Member screamed.
The screech was from Koel, it had Used the screech to Paralize the Starfox team.
As It did, The Team Had all coverd there ears and Screaming in Pain.
"Uhhh!!" SLippy Screamed as he shook his head.
"Grrr! We Can't let Him get any cheap shots Guys!" Fox Said In pain.
So they carried on there battle.
Falco's Ar-wing Was about to hit the ground Of the Unknown Planet.
"Guys! My transmission mighten be the best, But You guys are my family, And don't you ever forget it" Falco Said As He was seconds from death.
"FALCO!" Fox yelled through to Falco.
But he Got no reply.
Falco's Ar-wing had hit the ground.
But remarkibly Falco Had survived.
but His ar-wing was smashed to peices.
As he hit the ground, He was tossed out of the Ar-wing.
Altough he lived, He was Knocked out.
The surounding was calming.
Forest as far as the eye could see.
Random Animals passed by, They were the same animals at Conirias zoo's.
2 hours passed as falco Awoke.
"Urgh.." Falco Sighed in Pain.
"Were Am I" Falco Said.
Falco then noticed his Ar-wing was smashed into peices and bits lay everywere.
"No..." Falco said, His eyes opend wide as he noticed His pride ar-wing was destroid.
As he tryed to get up, A slightly burned picture lay on the grass.
It was a picture of Falco and Fox together.
"WIll I ever see you again.." Falco said in a small voice.
20 minutes went by as he sat down on some tree roots looking at the Photo.
Night was starting To Fall, So Falco Krept under a peice of metal From the Ar-wing.
He desided to put it over a gap or tree roots.
The tree roots were high, So once he put the part of metal on it, It was shelterd.
"It'll have to do" Falco said.
Night fell and Falco Slept.
The Battle was still underway, As koel was down to his last minute.
"We've got him now!" Fox said cheerfully.
Fox then shot his lat bomb at kowl.
It hit Koel, Right in the middle of It.
Each of the members took damage from the explosion of Koel.
"WOW! That was a bit of a blast" Fox said as he regained strenght from the blast.
"Phew.. We showed him" Slippy replyed.
"The Lylat Is saved!" Krystal Yelled.
"Yea... But Falco Isent" Fox said.
"Well, Lets go look for him!" Slippy Screamed.
"Not just now, We have to confurm Koels Defete to the general First" fox replyed...
Chapter 4
As the starfox Team Flew back to Coneria, Fox recieved a message.
"Well o' Well.. Look what we have here! The Pup!"
"Wolf! What Are you doing here!?" Fox said through that Transmission.
"I seen the explosion, Knowing you, I was positive i'd find you here" Wolf Said as he was Drawing closer.
"Ooooh... The Lovely Krystal.. Words can not discribe you're buitey.." Panther said.
"Were'z the Pesky Bird!" Leon said.
"He fell down to that planet!" Slippy Replyed to Leon.
"Slippy! You Talk to much!" Said Fox.
"It's time to take you down, Once and for all!" Wolf Shouted.
"Don't be to sure" Fox Replyed.
Fox and Wolf Imeddietly Started to shoot each other.
While Krystal Went for Leon And slippy went for Panther.
"You Have nothing Pup!" Wolf Yelled.
"Don't be so Cocky, Wolf" Fox replyed.
As the War between Fox and Wolf raged on, Wolf managed to get Behind Fox and started to shoot Fox.
"Urrgh" Fox Said as he manuverd out of the way by Backflipping.
"Now I have you!" Fox Said slyley.
"Tuesche Fox" Wolf Replyed.
as Wolf tried to Get away from fox, Slippy Turned to Wolf, And Charged up his lazer.
"You Can't honestly Belive you'll hit me Slippy" Wolf Said.
"Take that back!" SLippy said as he Shot Wolfl
"Grr.. So you're not as Useless as you seem" Wolf Said to slippy.
But slippy took his eye off Panther, And Panther shot Slippy.
"Urr!!" Slippy Said as his ar-wing shook.
"Ha, So you are useless" Wolf Laughed.
As the fight against Krystal And Leon Went on, Leon Seem to Be damaging her ship... Fast.
"Help fox! Ar-wings arnt ment to stand this much punishment!" Krystal Screamed out.
"Say Bye-Bye Krysssstal" Leon Said.
As Leon was one shot away from Killing Krystal, Panther Shot leons ship, Causing him to make him lazer miss Krystal.
"Don't touch her!" Panther said.
"Phew" Krystal Said in Relief.
"Come on Panther, Were here to take Down Starfox!" Leon Yelled.
"yes.. But not My Precious Krystal!" Panther Said.
"I'll get H-" "Enough! Staop Argueing You bunch of fools!" Wolf Interupted.
"Guys, We havent got enough time to fight Starwolf, Lets just go" Fox Said as Wolf, Leon and panther argued.
Starfox Managed to get away without The Starwolf team Noticing.
"Urrgh! We'll get you one day!" Wolf Shouted as he noticed the starfox team Had gone.
"Right, lets go to the General, And lets hope we get no more interuptions" Fox Said.
"Yea, I sure hate the Starwolf Gang!" Slippy replyed